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Guys. Whats your perfect girl look like? skinny, curvy
tall, petite
blonde, brunette, ebony, red head
dark skin, fair skin
And how about her personality? | | she'd look like my girlfriend. >> relatively tall, fit, brunette (or darker hair), tan. personality wise: fun, smart, sophisticated, witty, interesting, funny, spontaneous, down to earth, goal oriented, talented, athletic...etc. | Is Beyonce Knowls 5'3 inches tall? I read in an ebony magazine that beyonce stands a petite 5'3 inches. Ebony Mag stated She always wears super high heels like 6 inches with a platform so she appears taller. She does not look nowhere near 5-3 she has always looked 5-7 to me and that is the height she has been claiming. I'm 5-4 and love high heels 5 inches and up. I'm not super tall in heels I'm 5-8 in my highest heel because a 5 inch heel does not make you exactly 5 inches taller it will only add about 3-4 inches depending on if it has a platform.
My friend met beyonce at a concert backstage and she said Beyonce looked VERY TALL but she was wearing heels.
Did anyone ever meet BEYONCE in PERSON? How tall did she look? | | Beyonce's got enough corn on her toes to feed a small family of 4. | Please Read, Writing A Story? The protagonist, Gracelynn Daniels, has just moved to LA from Scotland and meets the guy from next door called Zeph. Later on she finds out he is a fallen angel. He fell cause he loved a mortal girl, Delilah, and made him kill a Siren (Gracelynn in a past life) as if you love someone you'll do anything for them. Delilah wanted to own the most beautiful voice and looks in the world . Zeph realised he loved the Siren more when he grew closer in order to kill her, but ultamitly had to kill the Siren as Delilah would tell everyone his secret. Now in modern times, Zeph finds this is his chance to capture his and the Siren's love again, now as Gracelynn. Sadly Delilah, now a high ranking deamon is back to earth in order to repeate history, hopefully succeding!
This is going to be aimed for mainly felmale teens, does my writing match my target?
Below I'm going to leave a small passage, please constructive critisism is apriciated, nasty comments are not! I'm only 15, be nice!
Gracelynn stole her last few breaths of Scottish air which she would be swapping for the smoggy, humid atmosphere of Los Angeles.
She didn’t want to leave, in fact just the thought of losing all she ever had and knew made butterflies in her stomach turn to roaring tigers. Gracelynn walked with reluctance onto the plane that would take her to ‘the land of dreams’. Almost immediately after Gracelynn had placed her feet onto the metal bird, the perfectly primed air hostess, who had seconds earlier greeted her onto the plane, slammed shut the door.
Gracelynn swivelled to turn to look out the door, to take her last glance of her homeland, but the airhostess whose nametag read Mallory, obstructed her view out the small porthole.
‘Can I help you honey?’ Mallory questioned in a distinctive and strong southern accent.
‘Nope it’s alright...’ Gracelynn glanced again at the name tag to confirm her name. ‘Mallory, or honey, whatever you prefer.’ Mallory appeared to be baffled by Gracelynn’s reaction. She tried to be as polite as possible, but that wasn’t a likely word you would use to describe it. That was the voice she would have to hear for years to come, maybe even from herself.
Why couldn’t I just stay in Aberdeen? Gracelynn thought to herself.
Gracelynn’s mum, Diana, who was already half way down the plane, called after her to take her seat. Gracelynn was nothing like her mum. Diana had thick hair that took on the colour of honey, eyes like rich hazelnuts and killer size eight figure. In comparison, Gracelynn was a petite five-foot-five inches and looked like a fairy next to Diana, her hair was almost ebony and curled like a helter-skelter and the greenest eyes that shone like dewy moss on a spring morning
The mother and daughter duo sat down- seats three and four row twelve- bucked the seatbelts together and adjusted the straps. This was the first time that Gracelynn had the chance to really think about the situation, it was actually time. The emotions were getting closer and closer to her. She scrunched herself into a ball and in a desperate attempt to conceal her emotions from Diana, turned away to the direction of the tiny window, her only escape. Suddenly she felt trickles, drip, drip, drip, down onto her rusted red jumper.
‘Gracie, I know this is a good thing for us, a new start, it’s time to move on. Forget everything about Dad.’ Diana did her best to console Gracelynn but she truly new nothing would work.
‘My name isn’t “Gracie”, it’s Gracelynn.’ The reality was she wanted to say so much more, let the world understand. She knew completely well that it wasn’t a ‘good’ thing, running away wasn’t the answer.
She didn’t want to forget her Dad. Gracelynn and her dad were a perfect match, an unrequited bond that joined them. But he had problems. He committed suicide four months previous; he had some mental illness Gracelynn could never remember.
The plane journey seemed to last for hours on end and so did the awkward silences. For most of it Gracelynn slept, but she watched a couple of films too when her mind was to blocked with the truth.
Diana was another matter. She was eyeing up one of the cabin crew in his smart, royal blue uniform. When the seatbelt sign was switched off Diana seemed to follow him into the compact toilets, far from classy. Gracelynn was perfectly aware what she was doing. It was no secret that she was part of the ‘mile high club’. She always told Gracelynn that being with lots men was her way of coping with the loss of her dad. Constant giggling and moaning was audible from it for a good forty-five minutes.
‘Sore stomach mum?’ Gracelynn sarcasm was obvious but Diana continued obliviously.
‘You could call it that, but god it’s good to get rid of it.’ While speaking Diana gave a sultry, come to bed look to the cabin crew member.
‘Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Los Angeles, the local time is ten pm. We do hope you have had a comfortable flight.’ | I *love* the premise (although I'm not anywhere near your target audiance, howver I do like YA novels as light reading, so I guess I count). I only skim-read your writing. It looks like it needs a little polish (but you're 15, so that's ok!) Keep at it.
Writers Digest has a number of great articles that you might enjoy; not all of the advice is good advice (or the right advice for every writer), but it's good to hear what others are saying about writing and how to write a better novel.
writersdigest.com/GeneralMenu/ | Do you like my characters for my book? feel free to edit? AZALIA [she who god has spared] Ah-zay-lee-ah
Age: 35
Location: Manhattan, New York
Azalia [Aza for short], is extreamly sweet and calm. For six years she has had some sort of spell cast upon her, to make her appear deathly ill. Her daughter, Isolde takes care of her. She also has a younger daughter, Kaelin. Her late husband, Cecil disappeared a year after Kaelin was born. He was very sarcastic, and a bit standoffish, but his good traits came out around Azalia.
Azalia was born into a large, vampire family. The vampire trait was not dominant, though she is a carrier. Both of her daughters inherited this, because Cecil was a pure vampire. Azalia’s sisters Astra, Estelle, Memoria, and Isis, all have a dominant trait for vampirism. It is unknown [for now], why Azalia’s genes are not dominent.
Azalia has hip-length white-blonde hair, and crystally blue eyes. She is short, and scrawny, though her skinnyness may be due to the spell cast upon her.
Isolde [she who is gazed upon] Ih-zol-dee
Age: 13+
Location: Manhattan, New York, Florence, Italy and VSFNB, [unknown location]
Isolde is well tempered, and very relaxed. She may have inherited this calm gene from her mother, though Isolde also inherited a slight stand-off gene from her father. She is not as welcoming as people can be, though she is never harsh. Isolde loves her family, and is on a mission to find her father secretly.
Isolde is a fairly good older sister, though she may disapeer for a day or so, and nobody knows where she will be. She loves ice, and snow. Isolde has three very close friends, Henre, Max, and Lucy. She also has a cousin, Tybal, whom she loves very much. Isolde is truly in love with her best friend Henre, though nobody knows that.
Nalanie is to be considered one of the most beautiful persons in the world. Nala has huge blue eyes, that are flecked with gold. She is very thin, and is about 5’5”. She has a narrow, petite nose, and full, red lips. She has a round face. The most amazing thing about Nalanie is her hair. She has rich shiny gold hair.
Kaelin Deidre [she who is pure of heart] Kay-lin Dee-dre
Age: 8
Location: Manhattan, New York
Kaelin is smiley and full of energy. Kaelin is constantly telling secrets, and cannot be trusted. Though, she is also kind-hearted, and knows how to handle tough situations. Kaelin does not know anything about her father. Kaelin role model is her sister, Isolde, but Isolde doesn’t know this.
Kaelin treats her elders with respect, though she is a little rough around guys her own age. She is brutely honest, and tells the truth, and can often offend her peers. Though, she is considered one of the “cool” guys at school. Kaelin loves the summertime, and loves the way sun feels on here skin. She cannot tan though, due to being a vampire. Kaelin is not much of a family guy, she would rather be at the local café, then with her many cousins.
Kaelin is very, very short, and thin [as vampires tend to be]. She has beautiful dark curly hair, and wide chocolate eyes. She has a thin face, and is extreamly pale [even to vampire standards].
Tariq [he who is a night visitor] Tahr-eek
Age: 349, [appears to be a teenager]
Location: Chicago, Illinois, VSFNB [unknown location]
Tariq is Kaelin’s soul mate. He has been bonded with her for over 600 years, and has been sleeping “in vain”, waiting for Kaelin to be born. Tariq is a very quiet, though very gentleman like. He enjoys using his powers to his advantage.
Tariq does not have many friends of any kind, except for Melinda Fallon, Aurelia Raven, and Nathaniel Nyx. Tariq was “in vain” for around 250 years, so he went back to VSOU VSOU to re-learn his powers he has forgotten.
Tariq is a golden skinned toned vampire. He has black hair, and has ebony eyes. Tariq is very tall, and has a slim, muscular build. He also has very “sharp”, significant features.
Melinda Fallon [Dark Beauty of a ruling family] Mee-lin-dah Faal-in
Age: 14
Location: Cambridge, Massachusetts. VSFNB vampire school for newborns.
Melinda Fallon, [Fal] is a typical innocent girl. She is very intrigued by the fact that she is a vampire, though it hasn’t hit her that she will be a heir to all of her families dark powers. Fal comes from a very long line of vampires.
Fal is very social. She loves the accompany of people. She is very peppy, but not hyper. Fal has many friends at VSFNB, though she prefers to hang out with Aurelius Raven, Tariq, and Nathaniel Nyx.
Fal skin is olive toned. Though her name translates to Dark Beauty of a ruling family, this is only referring to her dark powers, and extreme beauty. Fal has a thin, delecate body. She of a medium height, somewhere around 5’4. Fal has wavy red hair, and green eyes. She has a soft, somewhat round face, and sweet “babydoll” features.
thanks. [feel free to edit] | | i like how all of the names are so unique and rare, and they do all sound like vampires. your story sounds really good! | Create this character, First, middle, and last name? I will describe this person. Choose one name from each list.
This girl's name is Jayla. She is a teen and very girly. She is a Christian and loves being with her friends. She loves her puppy Arie. Jayla has short, cherry red hair and is very skinny and petite. She is about average height and is very popular and beautiful, all of the boys think she is the prettiest. She is closest with her mom and plays field hockey. She also comes from a very rich family and has a really nice, big house and is an only guy.
Since the first name is already Jayla, choose the middle and last name from the list. Please just only choose one from the list, no suggestions please, if you don't like any of the choices please don't answer.
Middle names:
-Dawn
-Gabrielle
-Nichole
-Lee
-Ebony
Last names:
-Maclachlan
-McLaughlin
-Taft
-Bachman
-Callaghan
At the end, type the full name from first, middle, and last.
Thank you! | | jayla lee taft | Do u like my charecters?? feel free 2 edit? AZALIA [she who god has spared] Ah-zay-lee-ah
Age: 35
Location: Manhattan, New York
Azalia [Aza for short], is extreamly sweet and calm. For six years she has had some sort of spell cast upon her, to make her appear deathly ill. Her daughter, Isolde takes care of her. She also has a younger daughter, Kaelin. Her late husband, Cecil disappeared a year after Kaelin was born. He was very sarcastic, and a bit standoffish, but his good traits came out around Azalia.
Azalia was born into a large, vampire family. The vampire trait was not dominant, though she is a carrier. Both of her daughters inherited this, because Cecil was a pure vampire. Azalia’s sisters Astra, Estelle, Memoria, and Isis, all have a dominant trait for vampirism. It is unknown [for now], why Azalia’s genes are not dominent.
Azalia has hip-length white-blonde hair, and crystally blue eyes. She is short, and scrawny, though her skinnyness may be due to the spell cast upon her.
Isolde [she who is gazed upon] Ih-zol-dee
Age: 13+
Location: Manhattan, New York, Florence, Italy and VSFNB, [unknown location]
Isolde is well tempered, and very relaxed. She may have inherited this calm gene from her mother, though Isolde also inherited a slight stand-off gene from her father. She is not as welcoming as people can be, though she is never harsh. Isolde loves her family, and is on a mission to find her father secretly.
Isolde is a fairly good older sister, though she may disapeer for a day or so, and nobody knows where she will be. She loves ice, and snow. Isolde has three very close friends, Henre, Max, and Lucy. She also has a cousin, Tybal, whom she loves very much. Isolde is truly in love with her best friend Henre, though nobody knows that.
Nalanie is to be considered one of the most beautiful persons in the world. Nala has huge blue eyes, that are flecked with gold. She is very thin, and is about 5’5”. She has a narrow, petite nose, and full, red lips. She has a round face. The most amazing thing about Nalanie is her hair. She has rich shiny gold hair.
Kaelin Deidre [she who is pure of heart] Kay-lin Dee-dre
Age: 8
Location: Manhattan, New York
Kaelin is smiley and full of energy. Kaelin is constantly telling secrets, and cannot be trusted. Though, she is also kind-hearted, and knows how to handle tough situations. Kaelin does not know anything about her father. Kaelin role model is her sister, Isolde, but Isolde doesn’t know this.
Kaelin treats her elders with respect, though she is a little rough around guys her own age. She is brutely honest, and tells the truth, and can often offend her peers. Though, she is considered one of the “cool” guys at school. Kaelin loves the summertime, and loves the way sun feels on here skin. She cannot tan though, due to being a vampire. Kaelin is not much of a family guy, she would rather be at the local café, then with her many cousins.
Kaelin is very, very short, and thin [as vampires tend to be]. She has beautiful dark curly hair, and wide chocolate eyes. She has a thin face, and is extreamly pale [even to vampire standards].
Tariq [he who is a night visitor] Tahr-eek
Age: 349, [appears to be a teenager]
Location: Chicago, Illinois, VSFNB [unknown location]
Tariq is Kaelin’s soul mate. He has been bonded with her for over 600 years, and has been sleeping “in vain”, waiting for Kaelin to be born. Tariq is a very quiet, though very gentleman like. He enjoys using his powers to his advantage.
Tariq does not have many friends of any kind, except for Melinda Fallon, Aurelia Raven, and Nathaniel Nyx. Tariq was “in vain” for around 250 years, so he went back to VSOU VSOU to re-learn his powers he has forgotten.
Tariq is a golden skinned toned vampire. He has black hair, and has ebony eyes. Tariq is very tall, and has a slim, muscular build. He also has very “sharp”, significant features.
Melinda Fallon [Dark Beauty of a ruling family] Mee-lin-dah Faal-in
Age: 14
Location: Cambridge, Massachusetts. VSFNB vampire school for newborns.
Melinda Fallon, [Fal] is a typical innocent girl. She is very intrigued by the fact that she is a vampire, though it hasn’t hit her that she will be a heir to all of her families dark powers. Fal comes from a very long line of vampires.
Fal is very social. She loves the accompany of people. She is very peppy, but not hyper. Fal has many friends at VSFNB, though she prefers to hang out with Aurelius Raven, Tariq, and Nathaniel Nyx.
Fal skin is olive toned. Though her name translates to Dark Beauty of a ruling family, this is only referring to her dark powers, and extreme beauty. Fal has a thin, delecate body. She of a medium height, somewhere around 5’4. Fal has wavy red hair, and green eyes. She has a soft, somewhat round face, and sweet “babydoll” features.
feel free 2 edit, etc, and tell me if you like them! thanks! | | It depends. What do they DO? Stories are about DOING, not just being. And a character is nothing without a story. | Would you read this if it was a novel? Ok well im writing a novel and id like to know if you would consider reading it... Im only showing the introduction of it though.
In the ebony night sky through the gloomy dead forest, seventeen year old Emerald is running as far away from her father as she can. She isn’t like your usual Death Bourne, with her wild thick turquoise hair, pale skin and bright green eyes the exact colour of her name. She is still a cannibal but everyone has a preference, hers is what they say is a vegetarian. From a distance her outfit looks like rags but really leaves sewn together with thin vines. Every time her small feet hit the ground she feels the wet mud squelching underneath her bare feet. Her hair whips her porcelain coloured face. Her big emerald green eyes look around desperately for a place to hide. The wind howls and thunder screeches through the air. A bolt of lightning roars down striking right in front of her. Knocking down a huge tree and sets it to flames. Sparks fly and the breeze thrashes the fire in her direction. Her ears pick up the thumping of her father’s footsteps so she continues running. Birds are screaming as more thunder hits the ground. Her dirty feet race to a massive tree, twenty times her size. Its leaves are thick and are vomiting with sick stench. She quickly climbs up to as far as she can without being noticed. His feet slow down and he stands right before the tree she is hiding in. Thunder roars through the wind and lightning strikes down on the branch she is crouched on. Half the branch snaps off, crashing to the ground. The racket gives away her hiding place. His pupils are enlarged filling the whole eye. He wear silver garments and with his left arm bare. He gives her an icy stare and raises his left arm. She can slightly see the black hole in their forearm. Inside is a gun with bullets filled with tranquillizer to female Death Bournes like herself.
CRASH!!
Lightning strikes down pounding the rest of the branch to the ground. She tumbles down to the branch below her. She moves quickly with the slippery wood and swings herself around the other side of the trunk. He continues firing at her. Thunder bolts of lightning scream to the ground, vibrating the rough surface beneath her. Fire rages through the storm and circles the area around her. It flickers slightly while attempting to cross the lake right by the tree she is in.
SMASH!!
The branch above her snaps from lightning knocking the branch she is on down with it. She smoothly runs her soft petite hands across the thick trunk and pushes her body against its cold dank surface. She forces herself up, grabbing bark between her fingers. She settles herself in the next branch. Her father is nowhere to be seen. She scans her surroundings looking at the enflamed trees and the lightning striking down.
SPLASH!!
A bullet fires and hits her in her right arm. Her small body falls out of the tree straight into that lake. Her body is paralysed; she is unable to do anything. She can feel the icy cold water against her skin. The water is thrashing and twisting into a whirlpool like shape. She can feel the agonising pain of it drowning her but her motionless body can’t do anything but feel the excruciation of being pulled in like a vacuum, deep into the bottom of the lake. She feels her lungs crushing and screaming for her to reach the surface and her conscious mind becomes more and more feeble. In few seconds she slips into what could’ve been death. | Yes, I would.
It's intriguing in several ways. | Do you like my charecters [so far]? ? AZALIA [she who god has spared] Ah-zay-lee-ah
Age: 35
Location: Manhattan, New York
Azalia [Aza for short], is extreamly sweet and calm. For six years she has had some sort of spell cast upon her, to make her appear deathly ill. Her daughter, Isolde takes care of her. She also has a younger daughter, Kaelin. Her late husband, Cecil disappeared a year after Kaelin was born. He was very sarcastic, and a bit standoffish, but his good traits came out around Azalia.
Azalia was born into a large, vampire family. The vampire trait was not dominant, though she is a carrier. Both of her daughters inherited this, because Cecil was a pure vampire. Azalia’s sisters Astra, Estelle, Memoria, and Isis, all have a dominant trait for vampirism. It is unknown [for now], why Azalia’s genes are not dominent.
Azalia has hip-length white-blonde hair, and crystally blue eyes. She is short, and scrawny, though her skinnyness may be due to the spell cast upon her.
Isolde [she who is gazed upon] Ih-zol-dee
Age: 13+
Location: Manhattan, New York, Florence, Italy and VSFNB, [unknown location]
Isolde is well tempered, and very relaxed. She may have inherited this calm gene from her mother, though Isolde also inherited a slight stand-off gene from her father. She is not as welcoming as people can be, though she is never harsh. Isolde loves her family, and is on a mission to find her father secretly.
Isolde is a fairly good older sister, though she may disapeer for a day or so, and nobody knows where she will be. She loves ice, and snow. Isolde has three very close friends, Henre, Max, and Lucy. She also has a cousin, Tybal, whom she loves very much. Isolde is truly in love with her best friend Henre, though nobody knows that.
Nalanie is to be considered one of the most beautiful persons in the world. Nala has huge blue eyes, that are flecked with gold. She is very thin, and is about 5’5”. She has a narrow, petite nose, and full, red lips. She has a round face. The most amazing thing about Nalanie is her hair. She has rich shiny gold hair.
Kaelin Deidre [she who is pure of heart] Kay-lin Dee-dre
Age: 8
Location: Manhattan, New York
Kaelin is smiley and full of energy. Kaelin is constantly telling secrets, and cannot be trusted. Though, she is also kind-hearted, and knows how to handle tough situations. Kaelin does not know anything about her father. Kaelin role model is her sister, Isolde, but Isolde doesn’t know this.
Kaelin treats her elders with respect, though she is a little rough around guys her own age. She is brutely honest, and tells the truth, and can often offend her peers. Though, she is considered one of the “cool” guys at school. Kaelin loves the summertime, and loves the way sun feels on here skin. She cannot tan though, due to being a vampire. Kaelin is not much of a family guy, she would rather be at the local café, then with her many cousins.
Kaelin is very, very short, and thin [as vampires tend to be]. She has beautiful dark curly hair, and wide chocolate eyes. She has a thin face, and is extreamly pale [even to vampire standards].
Tariq [he who is a night visitor] Tahr-eek
Age: 349, [appears to be a teenager]
Location: Chicago, Illinois, VSFNB [unknown location]
Tariq is Kaelin’s soul mate. He has been bonded with her for over 600 years, and has been sleeping “in vain”, waiting for Kaelin to be born. Tariq is a very quiet, though very gentleman like. He enjoys using his powers to his advantage.
Tariq does not have many friends of any kind, except for Melinda Fallon, Aurelia Raven, and Nathaniel Nyx. Tariq was “in vain” for around 250 years, so he went back to VSOU VSOU to re-learn his powers he has forgotten.
Tariq is a golden skinned toned vampire. He has black hair, and has ebony eyes. Tariq is very tall, and has a slim, muscular build. He also has very “sharp”, significant features.
Melinda Fallon [Dark Beauty of a ruling family] Mee-lin-dah Faal-in
Age: 14
Location: Cambridge, Massachusetts. VSFNB vampire school for newborns.
Melinda Fallon, [Fal] is a typical innocent girl. She is very intrigued by the fact that she is a vampire, though it hasn’t hit her that she will be a heir to all of her families dark powers. Fal comes from a very long line of vampires.
Fal is very social. She loves the accompany of people. She is very peppy, but not hyper. Fal has many friends at VSFNB, though she prefers to hang out with Aurelius Raven, Tariq, and Nathaniel Nyx.
Fal skin is olive toned. Though her name translates to Dark Beauty of a ruling family, this is only referring to her dark powers, and extreme beauty. Fal has a thin, delecate body. She of a medium height, somewhere around 5’4. Fal has wavy red hair, and green eyes. She has a soft, somewhat round face, and sweet “babydoll” features.
Aurelia Estelle [Gilded Star] Ow-real-ya Eh-stel
Age: 13
Location: Haines, Alaska VSFNB, Florence, Italy?
Aurel | I liked them all, I'm writing a book a vampires too and only 1(later 3) of them are good xD! nice
btw i'm in love with Tariq! lol | How do I add humour to this story? Story Plan-
Plot- Girls best friend (and neighbour) moves out, odd family moves in, girl uses friend’s old spare key to explore the house while family out, finds door that didn’t used to be there when her friend lived there, finds secret underground library, reads titles, finds out they are witches, befriends son, he tries to teach her the art of sorcery.
Ending- (Leads to sequel)
Spell goes badly wrong when attempting to open portal, littlest guy of the witch family vanishes into Shadow World (Extra sensory perception/Break in space, time continuum) when trying to open portal.
Books indicating they are witches (do not list all at same point in story)-
Magyk through the ages, The History of Magyk, Charms and Enchantments, Opening the Portals, Magyk for guys, DIY potion making, the many uses of crystals, The Ultimate-Everything Sorcery Book, The Cauldron cook book Vol. l & Vol. ll, Mastering Magyk, the annotated guide to spells and curses, why does mummy fly? - Answers to calm your young warlock’s worries, collecting crystals- a hobby for eternity, the art of reincarnation, charms and enchantments to leave your mates spellbound!
Characters-
Main- Aralayah
Best Friend- Callie-Anne
Aralayah’s Mum- Lilly
Aralayah’s Dad- Robert
Teacher- Mr Cole
Bully- Rosa
Witch Mother- Cobweb (known as Matilda when outside home so inconspicuous)
Witch Father- Adoeamros (Ross)
Twins-
Girl- Friday
Boy- Thirteen
Witch son- Twilight
Witch Daughter- Enchantment
Pet Tarantula- Webby
Character Descriptions-
Aralayah-
Nick Name- Ari
Age- Thirteen
Looks- Olive skin, dirty blonde hair, brown eyes, small, slim
Personality- Kind, sensitive, adventurous, nosey
Lives in- ???
Callie-Anne-
Nick Name- Cal
Age- thirteen
Looks- Small, mousey brown hair, green eyes
Lives- moved
Rosa-
Age- doesn’t matter
Looks- perfect.
Personality- MEAN, MEAN, MEAN!
Aralayah’s Mother- Lilly
Age- doesn’t matter
Looks- brown hair blue eyes small and round
Personality- is one of those people who you can’t lie to, not only because you feel bad, but also because she can TELL.
Aralayah’s Father- Robert
Age- doesn’t matter
Looks- brown hair, portly, red faced green eyes
Personality- very strange sense of humour…the ‘no-one-understands-a-thing-you-are-sayi… humour.
Mother of Witches-
Known as-
To family- Cobweb
Outside the house- Matilda
Age- doesn’t matter
Looks- Navy-blue-purple hair to shoulders in crazy tangles, black eyes, beautiful features, tall and slim.
Personality- Loving, easy going, caring, sweet, motherly
Father of Witches-
Adoeamros
Or Ross for short
Age- doesn’t matter
Looks- jagged black hair, black eyes, really pale skin
Personality- mysterious, we don’t see much of him as he is always in his study trying to make a potion that will enable people to take any form they want once taken
Twins-
Girl- Friday-
Ebony knee length black hair, deep violet eyes, pale skin
Very strange daring and unnerving
Boy- Thirteen-
Bleach blond shaggy hair, azure eyes, pale skin
Very strange sensible
Youngest witch boy-
Twilight
13
Dark brown lopsided floppy hair, grey eyes, very pale skin, looks like it was rubbed with talcum powder.
Playful, striving, stubborn
Youngest witch girl-
Enchantment
8
Fiery red curls in top notch so they fall in a puff around her head, petite, green – the green you always associate with envy, skin coloured like the cream of old lace- very pale.
Powers- only one in family with a natural power- to reflect someone else’s appearance onto herself.
Personality- cute. Cute. Cute….did I mention…cute?
Pet spider
Name-
Webby… | Enchantment looked around with a big puzzled look to see where she was. She set on a red Vinyl stool, her elbows resting on a long counter. she was setting in a old Chrome and Neon Diner, like out of the 30`s, The floor was covered with black and white checkered tiles, A large shinny old Juke box in the corner was playing a song she had never heard before, a women in a sweet voice was singing " how much is that doggy in the window'' Ruff ruff " the one with the waggly tail".
humming along with the song, Enchantment walked, almost dancing over to look out a large glass window. and she was shocked to see that the sky was a deep purple,and the paved parking lot in front of the old Diner was blood red.
She turned at the sound of a voice, A funny looking little old man dressed in white cloths wearing a cooks hat that was way too small for his head was looking at her.
" I bet you a bottom dollar, that your hunger enough to eat a horse'" he said as he did a little jig tapping his feet on the black and white floor.
She said " why yes Sir I am hunger", "but I don`t think I can eat a horse "
he motioned for her to sit down on one of the stools in front of the counter.
He magically produced a big gold bowl and placed in down in front of her, "This" he told her "was his great 23 bean soup". she studied the bowl of steaming soup, her hunger drove her to pick up a gold spoon and started eating.
the door flew open with a bang, she jumped and turned around to see a handsome man with black hair and next to him was a Beautiful Blonde lady dressed in a long silver gown, the man was dressed in a white jump suit with a blue Eagle stitched on the front and he was wearing a large belt buckle almost as big as a football, he nodded at Enchantment and with a big smile said " how are you little darling" the lady said " hi dear" and they went over to a red table, the guy kicked the chrome juke box lightly with his foot. and a song started playing. a man was singing " you ain`t nothing but a hound dog" "just a crying all the time" you ain`t never caught a rabbit and you ain`t no friend of mine". Enchantment looked at the little man and ask him, what was this place? where am I?
the little man smiled and said "well dear" this is the world in waiting" "is`nt it a lovely place".
She asked him what he meant by World in waiting.
he leaned real close and said "well this is where you go into waiting to see what is going to happen to you" " you see dear, this where you come if you hurt yourself, and you die" by accident or any means if you did`nt take care of yourself" he whispered too her see that young man there and the Blonde lady, " that my dear is ELVIS and she is Miss Marlyn Monroe.
she thought oh yes her dear Mommy had pictures of them they were famous.
the door flew open with a bang a loud bang, she jumped inside and out. she turned to see a small man dress in a black trench coat, wearing a funny looking Little mustache and he stinked to high heaven. he slowly walked back and slid into a rear corner booth. a dark cloud hung over him.
she whispered why are these people here. the little man told her that this is where you come if you died by your own hand
or did`nt take good care of yourself in the land of the living. see he told her that young man and lady did`nt take good care of their selves they both used drugs and accidentally killed themselves, the dark man there killed himself.
she turned and asked who is that dirty man. the little man told her to stay away from that one, he is evil, that my dear his HITLER, she slowly swallowed and said "Hitler the guy that killed millions of men, women and guyren. the little man lowed his face even with hers and looked her in the eyes "Yes" "that is him alright" he told her there was a women who came in with him, but she never comes out of her room.
she thought for a minute and ask, "Well !, Why am I hear I`m not dead" am I?
the little man told her No! your not dead, and we are going to find out why your here. I know a man here, a good man his name is John Wayne, he will help you out of this mess you got yourself in.
mean while back in the land of the living, everyone was searching for her, worried because it would soon be pitch dark, and they would have to wait until morning to look for her again.
well, I`ll stop you don`t have to use any of this I was just having fun, I have not wrote anything for years, I loved your story, I don`t think it has too be funny, but I thought maybe this would be a good story line back and forth. your story is good .you keep at it, and don`t you ever give up, OK? you very good BYE, God I had fun useing my old mind, Thanks for letting me play..
I thought it would be neat to have Elvis, miss monroe and John wayne fighting Hitlers dark forces that he had took control over in the land Of Waiting. to get enchantment make to the land of the living, and Elvis, Monroe, and John come with her back tp the land of the living, and they are so surprised the way America has changed, and to learn their all still famous after all these years. and there is a very sad ending with the three having to return to the land of waiting. |
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